What an impressive narrative you've constructed here! I'm blown away you were able to manage this is such a short time. The characters are so wonderful and clearly defined. Atticus is such a sweetheart that must be protected at all costs! I loved the call and response of the varying decisions and the audio cues. Very "tactile" in a way. Quite satisfying.
I did think the initial dream sequence where the knight is transitioning to waking in Atticus' house could be better represented with a total black out and punched up audio cues - cries of townsfolk, dragon roar, flames billowing, and the like. While the parchment effect is great, it doesn't really serve the immersion like it does the rest of the time with its sort of diary like presentation preserving the knight's legacy as the story unfolds.
Great work! SO GOOD!