Hi!! Not a submitter, but i'm the pixel artist of TRUST NOIR ( a Cyber-Noir Pixelart game)
Honestly I think that asking for a rate for rate is a cool way to know more indie devs and describe in a friendly way what your game is and recieve some useful feedbacks. I find it very fun. This is our first ever game jam tho so I can't help you much other than this, but I can give a look to your game.
/jam/brackeys-16/rate/4947071 here's the link to ours if you have some time to give us <3