Congratulations on your first jam. Achievement unlocked! :D
Wow, I love the character portraits! Really nice style.
Some minor suggestions to improve the game:
The grand sacrifice for our lord an saviour <== and
"pff, you still had energy to talk to people. How foolish" <== Please avoid evaluating the choices of the player like this. It's disrespectful.
The transition after the escape could be a black screen with a text. As it is currently it can easily be missed.
If you are interested in dialog mechanics please check out my game(s) - I'm innovating in this space.
Good luck!