Thanks for taking the time to explain your point of view in more detail, it really helps me understand where you were coming from.
I’m actually considering this as something I could revisit for a V2 of the adventure, and I’ll definitely keep your comments in mind. In particular, I think you’re right that I could give the DM more context and tools to better frame the narrative around the scenes, rather than presenting them mainly as a sequence of specific activities.
I’m also thinking about making the scenes more modular in LUMENDARK and I could use this adventure as a testing ground. For example, giving the DM a way to swap or replace scenes, and potentially add new ones if they want to make the adventure longer or take it in a different direction.
Your feedback gave me a much better idea of what I could improve if I revisit it. Thanks you again!