I Need review of my game but be honest I really be happy if you give some real suggestions to improve on
heres my game : /jam/brackeys-16/rate/4936757
filethirteen here from our team account because itch is rate limiting me:
This game was generally quite polished. A lot of little things like transitions and stuff jumped out at me. I was wondering what the box of batteries was for. I think some of the writing could use improvement but it was interesting to see everything. I kept playing because I was really interested in the world and characters you created. I feel like some of the gameplay could be polished further like modifying the hitbox on the phone so you can't accidentally look through the gap. I unfortunately didn't score high enough on the dart section and died haha. I also felt like the information in the tablet was a little hard to understand the meaning, and some of the writing felt a bit immature in some ways even though the themes were kinda heavy. Good job on this one. If you have a chance check mine out too:
Do note that it does require multiplayer, at least one other player should give you a good idea but 3 or more for best experience.