Focused and dense arthurian tragedy, really immersive through repetition but remains dynamic.
What I thought worked well
- Super clear writing, despite the density, it's an easy read
- Well organised
- A lot of content and systems
- Cool reuse of content without it feeling repetitive
What I thought could be improved
- Despite the good structure it lacked a bit in mood visually, felt a bit too clean and utilitarian
- I know it could be figured at the table, but a bit more around how the ghosts disposition could be handled would have gone a long way, feels like a great element that could add a lot but it gets a small paragraph.