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The sky has too much noise, it could have benefited from having a smoother gradient instead of the texture you applied. The sword hilt also needs more contrast, it gets lost in the sky.

The bricks turned out pretty cool though! I think the teal is a bit too bright and pulls too much focus away from the sword

Thankyou for the critique! I honestly have no idea what I’m doing, and don’t know any techniques to make it better. I’m not an artist and this is my first standalone piece based off the very few videos I’ve seen. :D 

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I mean, for being "not an artist" and this being your first piece, it's actually not bad. Sometimes you learn with experience.