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A jam submission

Rapunzel, RapunzelView project page

Submitted by Duelist1234 — 2 hours, 41 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#1022.8552.925
Use of Colors#1092.1962.250
Overall#1122.2202.275

Ranked from 40 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your art incorporate the theme?
A drawing of Rapunzel's tower

Would you like to receive constructive criticism/advice in the comments?

Yes

Type

Still

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Comments

Submitted

A bit simplistic, but it gets the point across! And the clouds are cute!

Submitted

it is very empty but i like the idea and the faces on the clouds is a nice touch

Submitted(+1)

It feels weirdly empty. I am not saying it is bad but the tower feels really ominous, if it weren't for the clouds, I would think this was from indie horror series. Just the hair, how empty it feels really makes you look at the tower. And without no humans or animals on screen if feels straight out of a creepypasta, I really like how it looks. 

Submitted(+1)

Awesome piece! I really like the setting and the way you used the negative space to your advantage! The piece doesn't feel noisy or cluttered and that allows the focal point to really shine!

I also really like the way you utilized the pallet! Everything feels distinct and is nicely colored!

That being said my only critique would be the line work. I feel that sometimes it can be a little too steep or sharp. I would generally suggest to try and make the slopes and curves a little smoother and a little more linear!

Regardless, you did a really good job! Well done!