The UI is on point and the dialogue is fun although maybe a little on the lengthy side without saying a ton. I wish reading it could be faster without skipping it! The visual style looks cool on the surface but a lot of sprites are inconsistent with others and there's some issues with pixel rendering in some places. The parry feels very good!
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Thanks a lot for the feedback!
Honestly, this was my first time writing a story for a game, and I definitely felt that the dialogue could become a bit heavy during actual gameplay. That’s one of the main things I want to improve from this jam.
I also hadn’t paid enough attention to the consistency between the different sprites, so that’s a really useful point too.
Glad to hear the parry felt good! Thanks again for playing and for the detailed feedback!