Thank you!
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Done, for some reason itch block me from leaving a comment on your submission’s page, so here are my few cents:
Interesting idea and a solid working game jam game.
Some critique:
- No clear goal. And as the game is kinda repetitive it is hard to keep your self playing after you uncovered few daemons.
- No hint for the player regarding the fact you have to use cctv to uncover daemons, not a big issue, but as the NPCs look kinda wired I was not sure if I should pass any of them at first.
- Some wire music could add a lot to the atmosphere.
Overall - congrats on finishing the game!
thanks for rating my submition. i know it was repetitive, also the goals were defined in rules. (maybe i failed to explain those or soemthing else) but anyways your review is appriciated, i know their is a lot which can be improved upon. to be honest the team also has plans to release this as a Play Store game after jam.
Good you have such an ambition, but you have to at least polish the game strongly, otherwise you will just waste $25 submission fee. The mobile gaming market is oversaturated, large companies invest billions in marketing campaigns to get players and players thus have very high expectations in terms of the product quality.
So, I advice you to be realistic about that. Research the market, check alike games and work on the product quality at least up to the average on the market. This will still not guarantee any success because it’s impossible for the individual to compete with mobile game corporation, but will at least increase some minor success probability a bit.