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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme | #84 | 3.214 | 3.214 |
| Overall | #108 | 2.333 | 2.333 |
| Use of Colors | #112 | 2.119 | 2.119 |
Ranked from 42 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your art incorporate the theme?
I just kinda did a little fantastical landscape with a big tower in the background. I think the few creatures (There's three!) add a lot to the vibes of "Fantasy world."
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Yes
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I love the creativity and how charming it is, just wish there was more detail to everything
The peak and the sky are close to blending together, I suggest you use a darker shade of blue. Also the creature peeking from behind the mountain also blends in. Otherwise great work.
Cute piece!
I will say that the mountain gets kind of buried by the other details since you use a lot of different hues and values all over the piece. I suggest you make sure that you have a clear separation between the tone and color of your focus and the rest. Maybe even make the rest a bit less noticeable.
Really nice piece! I really like the setting you chose for it, as well as the composition! The color usages is also quite spot on!
My only critique would be to try to be a little more careful with your line work. Sometimes it is really clean and other times it can get a little messy! So I would try to keep it consistent and try to form smooth curves and slops for things such as the mountains, for example!
Regardless, I can see that a lot of work was put into this piece! And I can say that I like it a lot! Great job!