Weird, gross, and fun! One of the best MB adventures I've read.
"A wheel of your favorite cheese (50sp)" is a really great treasure!!
And Besmooched is a truly horrible condition. Lots of creativity on
display here, plus evocative, clear and unpretentious writing.
This probably feels more Mork Borg-y and less Appendix N-y to me, but it's not like I've read all of Appendix N, so it's hard to pass that judgement.
Nice serviceable map and layout, I'd run this for some freaks who don't mind a nasty adventure.
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thanks for reading, and the high praise! My appendix N references are things like Masque of the Red Death, and the depraved leanings of the upper crust in Lieber's Swords Agaisnt books.
That said, it's possible I turned the dial sufficiently away from those sources to merit the criticism. In any case you will indeed need to be at least medium freaky to jam with this.
Appreciate it!