A super ambitious entry! The ideas are really cool. I like this idea that morning noon and night are days of not months apart. It’ll create a really cool vibe if played right.
I would recommend taking some time to reorganize and clarify some of the information in the background info. In the end I think I understood it but I needed to reread and take notes to get it.
Things that weren’t readily clear to me:
- The prince and princess are the ones jousting
- the joust will determine succession
- that the prince and princess are twins (at one point you just start referring to them as “the twins” and I had to go back and reread everything to see if I missed who the twins were)
- that morning afternoon and night were different days.
Things I still don’t fully understand
- It says the second day in the loop was Yders rock bottom, but I’m not sure what happens to them on that day.
- It says on the third day Yder betrays the wizard? Am I understanding that correctly? If so it’s not clear what he does.
I think with some more space a more fleshed out version of this could be really cool!