Honest review:
Really effective horror game. Great atmosphere. Sound design was good. Art was acceptable. The cartoonish teeth weren't consistent with the 3d assets and looked ridiculous. You could have just had them attack the player with their legs.
Theme fits perfectly.
Loading took noticeably long, you may want to optimise that moving forward, if you do intend to continue development.
You should have explained what the fairy lantern does in game, other than lighting things up.
The female elf at the exit didn't really chime with the rest of the game and the mood. I'd leave out the voice "acting" too.
All in all, a good entry, but with quite a few necessary improvements.