Well done, I left feedback. Here's mine /jam/brackeys-16/rate/4944290
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First of all, the narrative is quite original! It made me think of Michael Scofield lmao. I loved being immersed in the story that way, and it felt different from the other games I played during this jam. Also, good job on the presentation page! I also loved the music. It gave the game a slightly different vibe and made the experience feel more fun than stressful, which I really enjoyed.
The main issue I had was that the dialogues went by way too quickly for me to fully enjoy the game. I could barely read some of them, and I couldn't click on the characters again to reread what they had said. Because of that, I had to restart the game multiple times, which became quite frustrating.
The dialogues themselves could also use a bit more polishing, but I understand that some repetition is necessary since most characters need to give you the same information regardless of which path you take.
I guess I would've also enjoyed having some stealth elements, like needing to hide from or sneak past guards at certain points. I think it could make the escape feel a bit more interactive and add some tension to the gameplay.