I love what you were able to produce! These songs paint a clear picture of the fantasy world we're in and they remain sonically cohesive. Fairy/Goddess is a stand-out track with clear inspiration. There's not necessarily anything wrong with that inspiration, but I do personally feel like you could do a bit to make yours more unique whether it's changing up the figure or exploring more harmonic possibilities with that figure! Also, although I like the overall arc and sound of the final track, I would've liked to hear more variation in instrumentation. It feels like all of the instruments are playing the same parts for quite a while. The motif is growing dynamically, but having it grow in instrumentation and complexity would do a lot for the climax. Other than that you've got some really nice work here. 🐦⬛
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I really appreciate the feedback. I'm brand new to orchestration so advice like this will actually go a really long way. I did want to experiment more with that song in particular but I was pressed for time so I just had to get it done one way or another lol. Do you have any pieces you could recommend that I study for varying instrumentation and further developing the motif like you said?