I like the change from ambient to electronic between the two tracks. It really doubles down on the feel of the story you're telling through the music. In the first track, the drums could be woven into the mix a bit more. The snare especially stands out from the rest - it sounds dry compared to everything else. Otherwise great job!

I like that you introduced the synth in the first song as a way to tie it to the story of a peaceful world getting changed by technology.

I think the second song having more of that tech angle with a singular lute playing was a good choice. It gets dissonant which is fitting, but the hard, fast drums feel like it clashes somewhat too much with the really simple other instruments. I think they would have benefited from an additional song that really delved into the dystopia of it. Something that includes those fast drums but with a fast lyre melody to show how people were forced to change and adapt to the new world.

Absolutely loved it. I think the mixing could do some work in my opinion as I found the drums to be a bit too loud in both tracks and too punchy but composition wise I really loved it and it fits your description really well

Part 1: you’ve got a very solid groove here. I love the driving, varying guitar (I think) line you’ve got going with the drums. Solid track!

Part 2: like the transitioning soundscape and some of the ambient textures you’ve got going on. I also don’t love the drum part. I do like parts of the first part of the drums, and I don’t think it’s a bad idea to get some dirty drums going on at that point. I do like some of the wubwub and crunch sounds you’ve got going there. The second part of the drums is jarring in a bad way, the snare is just too piercing and aggressive I think. Maybe a warmer but still dirty sound pack might work better? Overall enjoyed the track.