This particular setting and story are really unique compared to other submissions that I've seen so far. I think that from a storytelling perspective, your songs lack clarity, as without the lore descriptions I felt kind of lost. From a writing standpoint, the dissonance does a good job at invoking a sense of dread, but occasionally comes across as random. Overall, I believe your album has a very unique sound that really elevates the story that you've written out in your brief descriptions, and it makes me want to learn more about the lore of your submission. Good job! (P.S. I also watched the YouTube version of A4rdable_Soul and I think the visuals are very cool)
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To be fair, I agree that my story telling methods musically were sub par. I would love to learn how to fix that as this is like the second or even third time I have ever attempted such a thing (first time of this large of a scale). Thank you for incredibly detailed amount of feedback. Im so happy that I received it.