Woag.
I appreciate how detailed your feedback is. Thank you so much!
Yeah the common issue even i had (after submission) was that my first track was unusually wrong. But that was due to me being stupid and misreading the rules and thinking that only one track was needed..and that one track had to be 3 minutes long. So I apologise for that.
And thank you for mentioning the "Classical" drum patterns, those were the first time i have ever done something like that on purpose, so im really proud of how they came out.
Thank you the kind words and feedback, they mean alot coming you (i really enjoyed your work)
I love how majestically the track sounds. Furthermore, I love the piano melodies the most in "When the World was Ours". And the string instruments in "Catharsis of the Past, Self and Future"
Moreover, not to mention the sound design. I loved the clock at the start of "Found in Absence"
The people who worked on the project deserves all the praise they get.
To be fair, I agree that my story telling methods musically were sub par. I would love to learn how to fix that as this is like the second or even third time I have ever attempted such a thing (first time of this large of a scale). Thank you for incredibly detailed amount of feedback. Im so happy that I received it.
"Sunshine in a bag" got me feeling incredibly unnerved.
"Just One Will Remain" has interesting melodies, but reminds me a journey through a desert for some reason.
"An Unending Envy for the Moral" is incredible. It feels disorientating, unnerved and yet understandable.
I love how "Some call it $3.99, some call it a billion" is so joyous compared to the rest.
"RedGlow" might be my favorite.
"Another You" sounds like its a pokemon battle against a ghost type.
Overall i think this album is really good and honestly i am in love with the decisions made for how some of these tracks sounds.
I really loved how "Wonderlab" and "Rotting Wasteyard". Have the same feel. Its almost showcasing there is a grimm feeling lurking nearby.
"Unsolved Matrix" reminds me of luigi's mansion if it was evil.
I think "Land of Opportunities" and "Lush Swamp" might be my favorites
Anyways, I gotta mention how much variation there was in this album/track. It felt like a new experience everytime the song changed, yet the flow to one another felt smooth. It is sooo good.