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Description
This is an electronic soundtrack, and is intended for a narrative action RPG. I used LMMS to create this.
Message from the artist
This is my first time participating in OST Composing Jam! I had lots of fun making music, and I look forward to seeing what everyone else cooked up.
Theme
Songs of a Forgotten World
How does it fit the theme?
This soundtrack is intended to convey part of a story of someone exploring a long-forgotten world.
Number of tracks2
Genre
Electronic
Synthwave/Retro
Soundtrack use permission
No
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Comments
Visions of Above has such a heartwarming vibe! I love your harmonic variety from the first to the second half, in which you return to the original melodic idea at the end with the piano. It ends a bit too abruptly, however, so try sustaining that note for a bit longer. The layering is quite ethereal and pretty overall. I like how you took some rhythms + melodic ideas and put them in a minor key with the battle theme. For the battle theme, I like the synthesizer harmonies, especially with the woodwind near the end. Also, maybe try amping up the percussion a bit, add a section that is a bit more intense, and maybe some chord changes to add more variety. These are just ideas, but if you want to lengthen the battle theme, then I think these can work. Banger track regardless. I love the soundfonts, as the textures are distinct, but no one element is overdoing it over the other (only the drums were a bit out of place; a bit too muffled and not enough of a punch to them, in my opinion). Great job!!
I really like how battle starts and the energy it brings quickly is great! The percussion feels a bit low quality compared to the instruments proper which is a shame because the melody and support in this track are excellent.
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah the percussion definitely needs work, I’ll make sure to spend more time on polishing it going forwards.
Really charming submission, was a little emotionnal listening to Visions of above. Heard some strange resonnances in the mix here and there, but nothing a year of training won't fix, so really good job.
Ah thank you for the feedback! Will make sure to work on my mixing. I definitely gotta start grinding…
My only complaint would be that the game doesn't exist, because I'd really like to hear the rest of the soundtrack.
I'll be keeping an eye out for your next works :3
AAA Thank you for such kind words! <3
Visions of Above is so cute! I love the synth so much. Among the Meteorites is really cool too, I just wished that there were more variety in the drums :)
Thanks for the feedback and kind words! Agree with you there, definitely could have done more with the drums…
Visions of Above: This is a really charming, sentimental melody! I like the gentle synth, and the more intense, washy synths you bring in later in the track. It definitely creates a sense of majesty and wanderlust.
Among Meteorites: definitely instills a sense of danger and action. Super cool, 80s synthwave vibes! You do a solid job of keeping things interesting, with a few countermelodies peppered in here and there.
In all, I'm impressed with your work, and would have loved to hear this story continue! Great work, and keep writing!
Ah, thanks for your thoughts and encouragement! I hope to work more on pieces inspired by this story going forwards.
This track is genienely majestic, i love how it feels, but maybe the mixing can be done propery. but i could be tweaking too, so dont mind my feedback alot
THANK YOU! Yeahh the mixing definitely needs work, I agree with you there. Thanks for the feedback!