Hi! Lovely composition. I felt like you were taking my ears on a journey and it was very easy to listen and follow along. Harmonically everything sounded great and progressed smoothly and sounded so warm. I am glad to hear variations of the main theme throughout. I think I am in the same camp as Jamil about the droning. It might have been nice to hear these instruments sometimes do something other than holding whole notes or if you can change the timbre throughout the sustain notes to give some player feel or expression to it. The beginning was great as instruments were being introduced, maybe play around with instruments resting and coming back in to change up the energy some? The rhythmic variations, embellishments, and liquidations, of your melodies are so lovely, it would be great to here that put into playing of the instruments carrying the harmony as well! Thanks for creating and submitting! It was a wonderful listen!