Your soundtrack shows variety and tells a complete story, so well done with that! You Will Pay is my favorite track, definitely a great climactic moment there. I might try having more aggressive drums for it, maybe some compression or replacing the kick, and see how that sounds, but I love the part at 1:50 when you can hear all the instruments coming together, playing different parts. I also like how you closed out the soundtrack with a nice farewell track. Nice work!