Loving the vibes you've going throughout this! The storytelling is unparalleled, even if I were to ignore the details outlined throughout the animatic! Your motivic writing is clear, coherent and engaging, and really does a great job of outlining the story-conflict and resolution! From the little extract I analyzed (bear in mind I'm not the best music theorist), your voice leading is quite idiomatic for the era and style, though I expect you don't need me to tell you that! There was just ONE tiny thing I was desperately hoping for in the beginning section of "As A Bell Tolls".
Firstly, I really enjoyed the choice to subvert the dominant-V we're expecting at bar 4 in favour of continuing the pedal tone, and using the dorian-6th to effectively replace it (VERY medieval). The one thing I was hoping for —however, was in bars 7-8: A French augmented 6 chord resolving to the V. It'd add just that extra little bit of power and uncertainty right before the bells. Of course, this is entirely a matter of taste, and the progression you've got is just as effective! I've got an audio example I can send in discord if you're interested
Thoroughly enjoyed the soundtrack. Great work!