Feedback on composition as promised : Good theme, its memorable I like the arrangement with the arps to embellish and complete the theme even though they are hard to hear (but you know you said your mix needs some work). The break at around 1 minute is good and the transition to 1:25 is nice but you have enough space to try a second melody there and not only playing the two empty chords waiting for something to happen, you builded up with the choir which is nice but not enough, you'll need more instrumentation to get me going. Overall the theme is nice but I think its too much present, repetition is great in music but there is also a threshold not too exaggerate and at the end I got tired of it, a real second theme or counter theme at some point a second phrase to get out of it and then bring it back would help a lot. Before big transitions also a classic cymbal swell is always welcomed.