This was a great read, and I'm so excited to play it! I really enjoy the concept and the tone, this feels like a lovely mix of emotional and whimsical. There were a few passages that felt repetitive, but you did a great job guiding the player through the game and imbuing everything with the flavor of the setting. It's also so impressive how much you did in 72 hours!
I wish I could play it before commenting, because I'm sure there's plenty that I missed, and I feel like some really great moments will emerge from actually playing through, but I wanted to make sure to leave a rating before I ran out of time.