A very well done story here! So far this is the most flushed out story I've seen with a soundtrack. You can really tell a lot of thought and effort went into these tracks. I don't have a lot of feedback but I do have a bit I'd like to share. The main thing being the mix of the lows. I am nit picking a bit but at times I wished there was more balanced lows to balance out the other frequencies. Also, in the second track I think the bass is slightly muddy imo. However with that being said, this is still a really well put together piece of work you've made and a great submission!