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You certainly have potential bro, solid entry.

I loved the vibe of this entry, all of it goes together very well. Nicely done!

I really loved you first track. The mix was perfect, the melody was very emotional, so very good. That track is definitely the type of bgm that would have to stop and listen to when playing a game. The second track was also very good, very much carries over the vibe from the first track. Nice work!

I really like the style you went for. It fits very well and is very whimsical! I'm also a sucker for any sort of vocals in tracks, especially jams. The vocals had me vibing so hard, and unlike some other entries you didn't use them too little. Perfect amount of vocals. Really solid entry!

First impression was really nice, great presentation! I really liked the vocals in the beginning and I wish they were featured more throughout the tracks. I also feel like the quality dipped slightly after the vocals cut out. Specifically the drums kind of through me off. Idk if you resample for drums but if you would like a suggestion for some life like drums try out SSD5 Free drummer, I think it'd fit your style. Other than that I really liked the vibe of the guitars and the composition was great, definitely conveys the eerie, electronic rock vibe. Great submission!

This might be one of my favorites so far, I wish there was more tracks but making this in 7 days is still very impressive. Composition is is very ear pleasing, mix is great, and all of your instruments sound so lively. I'm kinda jealous lol. Amazing submission!

I love the vibe of these tracks! They're very catchy whilst also not being too in your face. The phrasing is nice, the composition clearly has thought behind it. Very solid entry 👌

I enjoyed these tracks, nice entry! It would have been cool to see a bit of transition between tracks instead of the tracks just ending and the next beginning. Though, I do see you used Musescore 3 which is impressive in its own right. Overall not bad 👌

This certainly is a vibe, however I can't help but feel like this entry is lacking a bit of personality. Especially with its presentation. I did like the switch up at 3:05 though. Solid entry 👍

Nice entry! All of your tracks definitely sound connected and the consistency is there. Something I would work on is the mix, all around the balancing could use a bit of tweaking. Asides from that this is solid work <3

A very well done story here! So far this is the most flushed out story I've seen with a soundtrack. You can really tell a lot of thought and effort went into these tracks. I don't have a lot of feedback but I do have a bit I'd like to share. The main thing being the mix of the lows. I am nit picking a bit but at times I wished there was more balanced lows to balance out the other frequencies. Also, in the second track I think the bass is slightly muddy imo. However with that being said, this is still a really well put together piece of work you've made and a great submission! 

I enjoyed the first 10 minutes or so,  the vibe was very somber and relaxed. However as it kept going it all kinda sounded the same. Slow moving soundscapes with occasional fast electronic hints is cool but 30 mins of that gets a bit boring. I do like the idea and atmosphere of the tracks as a whole but I feel like the whole entry could've been cut in half. Still a solid entry tho!

If you told me that that you were a full time composer making AAA soundtracks I would believe you. Very well composed tracks that give off extremely polished vibes. I struggle to find critiques when the tracks are so good. I think my favorite out of the three is the first one as it reminds me of one of my favorite pieces "Halcyon Hearts". My only critique is that the first two songs kind of end abruptly. Like I expected more and it just stopped. But other than that, amazing entry!

This is a really fun listen! Very well mixed and the composition itself is high quality. I love the pacing as well. Very solid entry!

The 2 tracks have a nice ebb and flow, The whole thing move very naturally and I really like that. The mix at times is more or less harsh but still a great entry!

very nicely done! I like the druid's journal idea, it fits the theme well. I will say you should work on your mixes. There were a lot of harsh frequency that took away from the melodies at times. Overall good work 👏 

This is nice and has a lot of potential to be flushed out! I wish there was a tutorial bc I was stuck for a while trying to figure it out myself. Also, some bgm would be nice. Solid entry!

Nice deck-builder! I worked with a team on a deck-builder for GMTK iirc. I also really like the soothing nature of the music, as a composer myself. Really solid entry, good work! Only suggestions would have been art for the cards and an either picture or interactive tutorial.

Music is nice, i would suggest a picture tutorial or an interactive one. Nice entry!

Short and simple, nice entry!

I figured out the cause for your problem I believe. The long black screen is a loading screen whilst the assets all render. Before there were the long pauses the game would run really laggy. (at least for me it did) If you let it sit for a bit it should load and work no problem. If the problem persist between levels let us know, though I didn't seem to have a problem with the loading times after the first few transitions. Thanks for playing!

I really like the idea, very nice game. Extremely laggy tho, kinda unplayable

Nice short game, audio was kinda loud tho

Nice art style, I wish there were some animations or the ability to talk to npcs more than once

I see the level select bug has ben addressed. I wish the game had some audio tho. Solid idea overall

I really liked this game! Very impressive for only one person in this timeframe. Very polished. There was a few bugs I encountered like the message wouldn't pop up if i had the codebook up. Otherwise very nice!

Pretty fun game, didn't take to long to get a grasp of. Music kinda reminds me of baldi's basics. Good job!

Thanks for playing our game! Glad you enjoyed!

Thanks for playing!

Thank you for playing our game! We intentionally tried to capture the frantic feeling for our game. Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for playing our game and leaving such great feedback!

We are aware of the bug with the fate loop card and some other cards. We tried our best but time got the best of us. (Ironic isn't it?) Same goes with the layout and readability of the cards. We were so focused on getting all of the features to work (well, trying to) that weren't able to address that issue. If I could go back and fix one issue with the whole game it would probably be the readability. 

As for the difficulty, we did the best balancing we could with the time given. While it might seem easy, especially if you pay attention to the gameplay,  making a game to hard definitely would have shot us in the foot. In our opinion it's better to have a game where everyone has a chance to win rather than one where no one can. 

And on top of all of that, block not being displayed is honestly just an oversight on our end. 

Thank you again for playing, enjoying, and thoroughly evaluating our game! It means the world to our whole team. We wish you the best!

Thank you for playing our game and leaving feedback! There are a few bugs with the cards as we ran out of time while fixing them, but all is well that ends well.  Thanks again and best of luck to you as well!

Fun game! I just feel like the keybinds are a bit uncomfortable.

Fun cookie clicker styled game, nicely fits in the theme.  Wish there was an easier way of scrolling through the shop but still very fun!

Very simple, very chill, calm game. 👌

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I like this game, simple yet challenging. Atmosphere is kinda dull tho, some music would be nice. If there is some it's too quiet.

Fun game, but I wish the tracks were shorter. 6 minutes for one track where you basically do the same thing over and over is pushing it. I really like the idea tho. Also kind of wish you incorporated the rhythm aspect more. Like the hits being more on beat and there being repercussions for missing a beat. Still fun tho!

Fun game! Very simple and easy to grasp and get lost in. I enjoyed playing it!

Thank you so much for playing our game! I appreciate your feedback, we did notice that 'new cards' came up upon entry to the levels. While unintentional, we had to fix other bugs to keep the game playable.

Thanks again!