All right here we go
Angeles : Classic Grunt build up, I like the chords the vibe, I like the pan but maybe that was a bit too much for the main guitar you could maybe double pan it or make it a bit more center since you have other instruments playing in the background. 1:38 is the best thing great chord and here I got inspired I would've love to add something I have bunch of ideas, synth bass, you could put like 60% reverb on your chord, add an ambiant synth pad very stereo but smooth to get a great sense of "we are in a new section" . Later the piano stars, i'm bias as a pianist I love the piano, a bit more reverb on piano would be nice too to go well with the guitar on the right. More longer drum fils before important section switch would be better to help the build up. Drum mix was better than last time also good job.
Tides : Going straight to its, piano and guitar melody is okay, not great but okay, the arps is pretty basic, I think you can add variety and also get a better timing rythmically with the guitar, I think the guitar can get more clarity the more we build up in the tracks the more you add stuff the more it gets muddy, i've seen worse but there is still a lot happening and i'm losing clarity in the mix. The drum is also fine, it could probably be a little bit more in your face especially towards the end. But i'd say I recognize your style perfectly in this track, its melodically and harmonically pleasant and good to listen to.