Thank you for the review! I was worried it would be too many words andimages. Originally, I would've had VO work done to accompany the story with on-screen text, but some things fell through with that. I plan to put this all together cohesively in the future with more tracks and align them with the images (probably will make more drawings as well)!
Yay, more drawings, please! Yeah, while the fragmentation of the assets gives some sense of mystery and discovery (you don't really know what you will find at the next image) it is also true that it might generate some friction at the beginnig and affect the experience as one has to sort through everything. Looking forward to experiencing the next iteration! I am now even thinking this could be just a chapter of a longer story: the character might somehow survive, there might be places where the Mist has already vanished and there's more people living... A world of possibilities.