Nice orchestration! Just a side note, but the part where everything strips down to the solo harp could be done more effectively by having all the parts at a forte right before the next measure, as the harp plays, to create a strong dynamic contrast, and maybe some reverb on the forte as it slowly dies out, rather than immediately dying out. Also, an underlying pad can help with that transition while also highlighting the intimate nature of the harp. I enjoy the different sections you have, with the heaviness of the horns and drums transitioning into more of a determined feel, with the woodwinds taking over the melody, and that ascension (it almost sounds like a modulation) into the strings and woodwinds taking over the melody. Another nitpick, but I think some suspended cymbal rolls or some type of percussion roll would sound good leading up to the cymbal crashes and drum hits. The overall natural minor sound is quite nice. Very evocative of a cultural folktale/epic (with some hints of Dorian). Good job! I would love to hear this played live in a concert hall.