Just right off the start: For the foliage set the material alpha clipping value to 0.5 or something.
Okay, I was not able to pass the lady 3 times. I know where to go, but somehow I was not able to get past her. What I am mostly missing is the theme. I don't know if it would have been more clear at the end, but for me it seems not present.
The audio, art and gameplay is solid. So, for one week, good job.
Happy 20th rating!