The strings could be the perpetrator yes, I added those last, and I feel like they added some much needed thickness to the mix, but maybe if ever so slightly overfed it a little hahahaha. That's a tough one, I think it may especially be fighting the brass in certain parts, so perhaps they needed to spread out a little more.
Modulaition is a good call, I wasn't sure how to squeeze out that last bit of epicness, it's the last part I wrote, that could've been a difference maker for sure!
The choir comes from Zero-G Ethera Gold Atlantis 3.5, which is mostly a really good solo vocals library, but it also has a synth, so that's a vox pad I used, that has this beautiful, ethereal sound. Costs a bit, but on sale it's incredible value!
And good call! I wanted to use Eterinty of Lightwaves as inspiration, but didn't really know how to pull it off, kinda gave up on it a bit, but I suppose I landed there anyway hahahaha!
Thanks a bunch for listening, and the comment with your feedback, let's wait and see what the results are. :)