Love the goat, the color scheme, and the adventure hooks. Perhaps the type size of the conditions could be bumped up for readability?

extra credits for Mausritter! Love the climatic bbeg, love the kicker, mixed feeling on the overall setup of the forestcrawl. It looks very dangerous from a mouse point of vieiw, and this is so refreshing for classical fantasy.

I love the creativity on display here. Mice aren't usually this bad ass!

Scaling to page size tells me this is entirely readable when printed. This fact despite the color on color print! Kind of a nice change. You even include a print-friendly option, so no complaints about my printer eating a cartridge of ink. Cover is pretty basic stuff. Vague mouse tells us right away it's Mausritter even if the system note wasn't there too.

The back cover blurb could use a few passes to tighten up the writing a bit. Maybe vary the sentence lengths a bit more and add readability to the prose. I got the point without an issue, but it never hurts to add a bit of punch to the words or tightness to the wording. This persists into the hooks as well. Especially jarring is using mouse for mice in one spot, but then mice for mouse in a different spot. Hook 6 is interesting since it starts you in medias res.

The Tree Stump room was a rough start. The way room 1 reads, the longer I sit around searching, the more treasures just materialize in there. I assume that is just a misunderstanding of the wording choice. What I assume is supposed to be happening here is that they get a 1:3 chance of finding a treasure each turn spent looking, but once they do find something, there is nothing else. Also, I believe my book has treasure on page 38 rather than 36. Treasure is mentioned on page 36, but the table is on 38.

Interesting use of entangled through two very different encounters here. I like that. It's a smart use of limited space to create a unique set of situations. Not sure how I feel about it being the encounter element for both directions I can take from a single path though. At least one is a lot of smaller 'creatures' and the other is a single large threat.

Oof on the 4 inventory slots for the statue, but having it close to the entrance means there's a chance they can get it and go if that's the quest they are on. Fair balance I say. The maze could be a bit rough with a couple bad rolls. Creature list starts on page 22 though. The real issue though is the last sentence.

“If you find...” My initial reaction was to want some mechanic for finding them since it's in the middle of a maze, then I realized you meant 'If you found...”, referencing the hooves in one area and the saliva in another. The word 'find' had me thinking it was something to discover in the maze itself. It needs a counterpoint though. If you didn't find them, do you just wander and come out in some random spot on the map?

Swords area visually had me wonder about scale, but getting to this entry clarifies it. That's good. Random sword, but again the page number doesn't match my book. The sword tables are on page 39 for me. I'm starting to question if these page number issues are a mistake or if I somehow have a different version of the book.

Hermefaun doesn't note warband scale on itself, but kind of implies it. It's something as big as a goat vs a bunch of mice after all. This is reinforced by the fact the spell grants identical statistics and notes warband scale. I'd just make a note on the Faun himself as well since you read that first. Probably more importantly though, the spell is pretty OP. Being able to shift into a warband scale creature and the only recharge needed is to act like a goat for a week and eat grass.. sold. It would become just about anyone's go-to spell over any other option the minute a cat or hawk showed up. I think I would either make the recharge much harder or make the spell into something simpler like giving the user horns they can gain a ram attack with.

Overall, this isn't bad. You're not stuck going a single direction, you have multiple goals you can focus on, and there's a good chance they go in, find the goat, run, then have to come all the way back with a warband. Adds depth. A few spots could use a little more mechanical attention and the writing needs to be cleaned up. Also, double check your page numbers to make sure we don't just have different versions of the book or something. Multiple page references were askew for me. Usually by 2 to 3 pages off. Congratulations on being one of the ones to make it to the finish line and hopefully if you plan to expand on this or update it, you can find some useful things from my review.

So fun! I’m giving my son Mausritter for his birthday and will let you know when we play this how it goes. A perfect adventure heading towards the Fall/Halloween season. I like the goat morph spell. I would have liked a bit more flavor text for each location, maybe an adjective that sets the tone, otherwise I have no feedback.

I really like the art in this adventure. The choice of analog tools really gives it a texture and weight. Seems like a fun spooky adventure. 

Nice and creepy Mausritter adventure!

As others have said, fantastic map! I've never played Mausritter but this has really sparked my interest! Thanks for this submission, it was a joy to read!

ill echo other below, excellent map. Love the design and the hooks at the back, especially the cat and mouse game.  Ive never played mausritter but friends of mine love it.  Gonna pass this little guy on to them.

A great little adventure. I love both the map and the cover and the visuals are as solid as the writing

I LOVE the art - it's rad. A really neat adventure - using the blurb on the back to set up the adventure background and provide some hooks is really clever.

Love Mausritter and love the map!

A fun module. Love the cover and backcover work which turns the whole module into a true booklet. The font use is wild. The writing is solid and the key information come across. 

A very cool Mausritter adventure! I really like the custom conditions and, of course, the GOATMORPH spell which had make me laugh when reading its description. I also like the creepy vibes and overall weirdness as well as the custom art and overall presentation.

I’ll go into more details as to what I think could be improved since you asked for it on Discord:

• I find the font work to be a bit busy: there are a lots of fonts used, with varying weights and sizes, and sometimes a different font is used for the same kind of information (conditions VS spell of goatmorph for example). A bit more consistency would make it easier to process.
• Some paddings and margins are inconsistent (stat blocks have no padding on the left, location 2 title has no top margin). These could use a tad of polish
• The white-on-yellow used for locations keys on the map is really hard to read for me. I just noticed where the 4 is while writing this 😅

This is awesome. Great concept and execution.

I adore the goatmorph spell! The recharge looks fun to roleplay, and it seems like it would be a blast to go head-to-head (literally) vs the Hermefaun itself.

I hear him, master! The Hoofed One calls to us from the Forest!

Yes, yes yes! The art and the theme work so well together! I appreciate the status effect handouts, as well as the goat form (the real status effect: goat y/n). Printables and play aids are such a great way to engage with your friends!

The creature statistics could use some bounding boxes to keep them out of the main descriptive text, but I have no notes beyond that. 

I find myself repeating the same sentiment in these reviews: the best entries in this  4 page format always leaves me wanting more - the material could really shine in a 16 or 32 page format.