Nice work Roadkillcandy!! Your voice tone and content were great! Especially loved the singing. On the technical side there are a few clips that have loud pops at the start or end of the file, adding a fade or trimming the length should solve that. I would also avoid delivering audio assets in mp3 format, it can reduce the quality audibly, stick to WAV 44.1khz/16bit. Lastly I would add your name or the asset packs name to the files that way once someone takes an asset out of the pack they can still keep track of where and what the asset is. Something like roadkillcandy-character-attacks or free_VO_packs-character-attacks.
Again great work!