Cute puzzle mystery game! I like the art style. Although, it is a bit strange when Storm sits down with the laptop. It seems like she becomes part of the background because she looks scaled up and filtered (like the background). Storm also doesn't appear to play her walk animation when walking up and down directly (unlike Wren). The hallway could stand to be a lot shorter, and the seams in the texture between the beginning and the end of the hallway are visible. Additionally, the beads on Wren's pants only appear when she is walking.
To be clear, I did enjoy this short mystery experience. It has a good ambiance, but it could use some more polish.