Hi-hi, thank you so much for this comprehensive feedback. I appreciate that you give your pros and cons on almost every aspects of the adventure. Yes indeed, the lack of available space is our biggest challenge. Especially during map creation, it is a bit weird to have a 1 story mansion without 2nd floor.
Also, yeah I've heard some people couldn't see the room numbering and experienced it myself, opening the pdf in a different pdf viewer helps, but for your problem, this is the first time I've heard it, maybe it's a pdf viewer issue as well. But noted on that.
A lot of thing that you mentioned on your feedback is really insightful and we are already discussing which one should be on the expanded edition. Thank you once again for your comprehensive and insightful feedback, I believe your feedback can improve Wolf, Wizard, and Knight.
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I went back in to get a screenshot and realized what the weird distortion is. As I looked again, it is only appearing over a single word. Hastur. I have to assume it was fully intentional. That said, I must assume it was an idea to show the corruption and you do want to keep it. I think I would simply tone it down a little so it's not making the reading quite so difficult. It's not a bad idea and it isn't as though I couldn't read around it with effort. I think the small font is what made it so much worse for me than it probably was for others. If anything, I would maybe just lower the opacity of the corruption effect