I want to clarify -- I really like the game, and I appreciate all of the (incredibly fast!) work you have put into it. It just feels to me like the story might be suffering a little bit for the speed.
Noted and I have zero problem with constructive criticism. This is a learning experience for me as well and I am thoroughly enjoying this entire process and appreciate people calling out what they think is weak. It may be a retroactive pass but I'll add some depth to these areas.
