Finally got around to playing the game, and I gotta say, I am a huge fan of the fantasy style. The characters are very well designed, and I am excited to see how this one progresses.
That being said, it isn't without its flaws. There are numerous grammatical mistakes throughout the story, which are usually minor incidents like capitalization errors or missing punctuation, but they're never drastic enough that you can't understand what's happening. For a very early work in progress, though, I've definitely seen worse, so don't let it dissuade you from trying out this game.
Also Nera is freaking adorable and I an super excited to see how her friendship/relationship with the MC blossoms.
P.S. You should add a default name to the MC in case the name selection is empty, otherwise it does look weird when the MC is talking, since there is no name input, so it looks like an inner monologue, and when others address the MC, its just blank so it looks strange.
Thank you so so much for this amazing comment and feedback Zell
It means the world to me truly
Yes ! I will have the grammatical errors polished and changed for the next update and will do a better check of them in the future. Can't be having that anymore.
I am so fricking glad you like Nera seeing as how she will be a major part of the story as a character, she needed to come out as she did ! And well to continue down that path hahah
Can't wait to showcase the world and where it is going, thank you so much for taking the time playing, reviewing and leaving me a feedback.
You did everything any dev would always want to see and hope for.
Also thank you for the call on the name, bad part from my side if I'm being honest I really thought I did actually leave a default name but it must have slipped my mind entirely. Will have that for the next update
Thank you for everything, enjoy your day to the max !