This definitely had potential, but it also felt a little rushed. I felt the computer task was a bit boring and repetitive, which kills the fun part of the game (it also feels like this is where most of the 10 mins gameplay time goes). I did however like the storyline, as well as the jump scare with the colleague :) The player controls feels great, as well as the interaction wit h objects. What would make this more fun, is maybe having the player only have to reply to about 5 emails but then have some more smaller tasks the player could do, such as cleaning up rubbish, getting a drink, brushing the floor etc. just to break up the monotony of answering loads of emails. Then maybe have some more strange events such as, the office lights go off whilst you're on the computer so you have to get up and switch them back on. Or the phone rings but it's just some heavy breathing instead of someone talking and so on :) This is definitely not a negative criticism, but more of an encouragement, as I can see a lot of potential with this game and I really wanted this to last a bit longer. Overall though, great job and good luck with your future projects :)
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback!
You make a really good point about the computer tasks getting a bit repetitive. I actually love your ideas for breaking it up with smaller chores and spooky events like the lights going out or the phone ringing. Those are great ways to build tension.
I am super glad you liked the story, the controls, and that colleague scare though. Hearing that you wanted the game to last longer is honestly an awesome compliment. Thanks for the encouragement and support, it really helps!