Other than a few typos and some images not found in the game, it was a good visual novel. I liked all the routes, but it's disappointing that even in the escape route, the protagonist never truly escapes. I had to press ignore when the errors popped up on the screen. This is one of them:
Otherwise, I changed the text in accessibility to make the size of the text bigger and to change the font to a more readable one, at least for me, anyway. Furthermore, the coloring of the text blends in with the backgrounds of the game menu and main menu and can become unreadable in certain places in those menu screens. Additionally, you can hide the quick menu with $ quick_menu = False. That way, it goes away, since you have buttons meant for those actions instead. Just a tip and a suggestion there. Regardless of the minor nitpicks, I liked the cute art style, the cohesion of the candy artwork throughout, and the bittersweet endings. Keep up the good work!