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Hi there!

Thank you again for your comment during the jam. I just wanted to let you know that I took your advice on changing up the aesthetic and expanding on the core mechanic. Feel free to give it another go, but really I just wanted to let you know I appreciated your feedback!

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Hello, I'm glad you've continued working on this game! I like the changes, but I think you could take it even further!

I have 2 advice, 1 objective and 1 subjective. The first one is that you should color the enemies in a color that contrasts the background. Like orange maybe or anything you want, but not purple if the background is purple, nor any similar color.

The second one is that I would make a more detailed character for the player. Either give it some facial expressions (if Nintendo managed to make a pink blob famous, why couldn't you, haha), or remake it into some creature. Maybe if you want to keep the food theming with the tomatoes and the broccoli, make it a character that eats a lot or has a big mouth. But as I said, this is just a personal preference, you are the cook!

Good luck making games!