Minor thing: I found a duplicate phrase in one of the fire/light imprints: "...heat keeps pushing the change forward; glare keeps exposing the next flaw."
Also, I don't understand the force tempering efficiency. Initially it seemed that once my force tempering reached the full-efficiency level for a zone, then I'd be about on par with the strongest of those enemies, I'd be able to withstand them, and I'd start gaining much less force tempering from them. Now I'm working my way into the first of the six regions, and I'm at more than double the full-efficiency force tempering (550 vs 190), but my power is still less than enemy level 3. I reforged from the starting impressions to the third-tier impressions, which helped somewhat (I was hardly able to fight in this area at all before that) but I still don't understand what the point of the full-efficiency level is if it's so much weaker than the actual strength of the enemies. Or is the point that fighting is going to continually get less and less efficient and will take longer and longer to improve?