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This was a nice game omg!

😭 I felt uncomfortable reading that other group chat, because I’ve been on that other end, seeing what people really think of you. That brought back some old memories of internet ‘friends’ doing this, but I felt a little relieved when everyone in that group chat all realized their mistakes and became more empathetic, and I liked that Kai was the one to defend the player character. Adam definitely reminded me of someone from my recent past who I thought was empathetic but I gave them the benefit of the doubt because in reality their coldness was just a result of their own mental issues (wasn’t AuDHD but a mental issue regardless).

In my opinion, it is a good thing that a game made me feel this.

Secondly, HOOOOOOOOWWWW did you do all of this in TWINE? One of my dreams is to make an impressive twine game, and I love phone games like this. How did you do all of this with HTML? It’s so smooth. The little wiggle animation. The stats, the interface! I wish I was proficient in HTML to make my email game look like an actual website. I know you don’t have to answer with all the libraries and codes you used but I am interested in the How. I also love the addition of achievements, didn’t know that was possible in Twine!

Lastly, I am glad your protagonist and the side characters all have ADHD. It makes me wonder how did they all find each other. It did feel a little overwhelming that they all had it, but again that’s a good thing. I have that too, so it’s really nice to see it up front and center in a Twine/cellphone game.

This reminded me of Sara is Missing and Simulacra, which are phone games I enjoyed too!

I will also leave my comment on the game page itself so you can have more reviews!

Ahhh, thank you so much! And thank you for sharing how you personally related to the game. Even though I'm AuDHD myself, I was most nervous about how it would land with folks from the community, so I'm really glad it felt authentic.

I know folks like us can also deal with rejection sensitivity (so glad to finally have language for it), which is why one of the meds I'm on targets exactly that. It's made a huge difference in my confidence and in speaking my mind without apologizing for taking up space. I knew I needed at least one character to get defensive, and Adam felt like the best fit based on how I wrote his personality in my GDD. He eventually comes around, though (again, that pesky rejection sensitivity).

It's sprinkled in but not explicit: they all met at UCLA, and now they're in their late 20s/early 30s, still in LA, and found out later in life that they're ADHD. I've noticed that, just like in my queer circles, folks like us tend to be magnets for each other. Conversations just feel better in a way that's hard to explain, like being able to juggle four topics at once, lol, where neurotypical folks might find that confusing or get flustered. We're also less likely to mask around each other, intentionally or not. That's how it went with my friend group too: I found out first, then they started going "OH," and it snowballed from there in the best way. I've started telling people, "Congratulations. If we're friends, you're likely queer and/or neurodivergent." 🤣

SO, Twine! It's a combination of HTML, CSS, and JavaScript, and you can add your own CSS and JavaScript right in. There are tons of great free macros and widgets out there that can really elevate your storytelling. If you use Twine with SugarCube, it unlocks powerful features like audio. I'm currently pushing the boundaries with it, and even I'm surprised by what you can do with passages. I kept getting stuck thinking I could only make branching games, but it's honestly incredible what's possible. 

Thanks again 💜