Not too bad, you went pretty simple on this one, normaly you go pretty big with your ochestral template but I like that you purposely tone it down. The main thing to watch for I would say is how you play the instruments, its showing alot in the woodwinds but it always stops abruptly exactly like you are playing it on a MIDI keyboard but it's not how it's suppose to sound or be played which is why it sounds slightly unatural, if you fix the way every orchestral instruments are being played using MIDI it will enhanced ALL your tracks, I mean EVERYTHING, so kee up ! I know you did not have a lot of time on your track and yet still manage to make it good job !
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Thanks so much FoxHyode! I really look forward to your feedback every time. You are totally right. I did not do enough MIDI for the woodwinds! I should have. I think they were meant to be staccatos but I can't remember. Anyway, really need to do more MIDI with them all. I did it for the strings and should have done it with the woodwinds haha. That is very easy to fix anyway. Thanks for the heads up. Plus I am glad you liked it.
Yah, I went simpler because I was thinking soundscape. I actually wanted to do a song about a Monk by a lake, but didn't have the time so I ended up with this. Plus I had the worst trouble of coming up with anything! Thanks! You are the best!