Starting in C Locrian and switching to C Phrygian was a smart way to create that mysterious shift, and the drone note change in the first 30 seconds works well as a structural device. My main note is that the track drifts out of ambient territory in places, so pulling back some of the foregrounded elements would help it sit more firmly in the genre. The lake theme comes through well, especially given how much thought you put into the setting.

Really solid work; I really like the compositional elements!

Cool track, very melodic, I like that interesting mix with very modern percussions and synths combined with more organic asian-like sound palette, good story telling throughout the track with great moments, good job !

The plucks in the intro sound a bit hot and harsh, but the rest of the mix sounds good. Nice composition in the Eastern/Asian style.

This is pretty awesome in terms of the story you put behind it and the music itself. Though it is not ambient per say, it did have a really good and feel and vibe to it. It felt very eastern and i think the two modes you had really helped bring that out, plus the instruments. Perhaps to make it more ambient sounding you could make things quieter or make is sound like they are more in the background in stead of the foreground. Solid work here. Really enjoyed listening to it.

This is fairly far from being ambient.  It's good otherwise, but really off from the theme.

I really like the Composure, but it's not the best in terms of Ambient music, NGL... I really like how the Drums sound, along with the Erhu near the end, and just the overall melody.. Sounds like something from JADE Ethnic Orchestra, which is one of my favorite Kontakt Libraries to use! Overall, it doesn't sound too ambient, but it's still a really good song!