It's a nice track! Love the slow koto stuff, but the wind is a bit too loud and overpowering, and it can sometimes can take away from the other stuff that was going on, I think it should still have wind, but a bit quieter might have been better so the other parts can shine too.

I’ll just reinforce some points: good balance of textures, felt like there could have been more going on, lack of fade-out does feel abrupt.

This is subjective depending on the vibe you’re going for I think, but ill try to offer something new to consider. Specifically, I feel like your melody could have used more emotional movement. Like the melody felt a little more random and lacked real emotional movement for me. A sense of direction may have added that something else others were looking for I think. But also if you want it to meander, and that’s the vibe you’re looking for, ya did it!

It's a great track! I think adding another instrument or percussions, Varying the melody a little bit could take it to the next level .

Fits very well what I had in mind for the theme ! I like the textures its well balanced, I would've love some small variations here and there just to spice things up, also a simple fade out at the end would benefit for the listener instead of an abrupt end, good job !