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wonderfully written game with bone-chilling art, music and world-building! I’m in absolute awe of how delicately and grimly written the narration and story is.

the implied metaphor of the pirogue slicing through the water like a knife, the venom-filled inner monologue of our character toward the priest’s reassurance, the purple flowers that once looked beautiful but now silvery and washed out in the bayou.

it’s such a visual feast, one specific scene that painted such a vivid image for me was the long, lithe fingers crawling out of the low hollow like a spider. the face like a baby’s but wrinkled like bark? the juxtaposition sent my rhetorical wig flying!! genuinely disturbed me. loved it!

1 tiny criticism: I do wish the main text body was as light as the speaking character’s text, for easier reading.

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Thank you so much for playing!! I really appreciate the comprehensive review,, thank you so much!! :D

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I'm glad you enjoyed Laurie's writing and that they were able to paint such vivid imagery for you! And thank you so much for the feedback on the text visibility as well. We'll definitely consider addressing that after the jam! 

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Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the writing and thank you for the crit, that's really helpful :D 

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Thanks so much for trying it Coco! We're so glad you enjoyed :D (also ty for the feedback, that makes a lot of sense!)