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Content Warnings
All is write on my itch.io site and in the game "About
Team Credits & Cast
All is write on the game. In "About"
Work Start Date
First project started on 1st September, but the first folder was created on 18th September
Which engines and/or plugins did you use? (NaniNovel, Light.VN, etc.)
Ren'Py
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This was a pretty intriguing premise to work with. I think you did a good job trying to put everything together to give a kind of demo of what you'd want to do in a longer version. Since you're asking for feedback, I do think that some of the artwork didn't quite mesh well together (I think Nancy looked a bit out of place specifically) but at the same time I did like what you were doing with the angel and the different font. The music and sfx selection did work out well though and I think with more polish overall there's a lot you seem capable of doing in creating the right atmosphere!
Hope you'll continue working on this, as there's a lot of promise with your hidden stat system and unreliable narrator! Best of luck!
This is a very fun premise - I'd be interested to play more! I like the UI, the changes in font with the angel and the voice, seems like very solid bones! Great job :)
Thanks for the feedback. If you have any suggestions, please don't hesitate to share them. I always want to improve.
Lots of art and good sound effect placement.
Story itself needs a bit more time in the oven. The premise is there, but the polish is missing a bit (typos, tense switches, inconsistencies and some pacing).
Thank you for the comment and for the compliments.
Regarding the advice, can I ask you to be more specific? It's the first time I do a Visual Novel game and I think every constructive criticism is excellent. So if you want to give me some suggestions to improve the game I gladly accept them :)