- The introductory paragraph to Nicasio is ambiguous (but I’ve already spoken to you about it)
- Game over does not… lead to a game over? It restarts from the last paragraph.
- The background art is lovely, reminds me of old cartoons. It’s a shame there is not more consistency, since half of the backgrounds are photo-bashed (or so I assume) and the other are hand-drawn.
- It would be nice if there was more movement with the sprites. (Which is to say there is some, just took a while to reach it as a player.)
- Bonus points for dyslectic font!
- You spelled “Gardner” instead of “Gardener”(or was that intentional?)
- I cannot claim to understand why the game ended in the manner it did, but, the ending CGs was sweet. Overall, my experience with the game was a positive one.