The water splashes are too forward and too dry - it doesn't blend with the instruments. The production is good, but could use some glue to sew everything together (add some reverb and/or a soft string synth). Otherwise it's a solid entry and explores a variety of sounds.
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Thank you so much for the feedback! A soft string synth at the background sounds like a great idea and I totally agree about the water splashes: the more I hear them, specially the ones before 0:30, the more I feel like there's someone washing the dishes while the music is sounding at the background... Lots to learn.